Welcome back to White Rose of Avalon, my Darlings. For today’s post, I am sharing a poem about my love of the Cosmos!
Among the Stars
by Maranda Wabik
Stars sparkling in the inky sky
As I lean my head up to catch their twinkling eye
Oh, how lovely it would be
To be among the Stars that I see
Swimming in the Cosmos
Greeting the Moon
Dancing with the Stars
Roaming from Constellation to Constellation
Learning wisdom from the Astrological rulers
Oh, how much I could learn
From being among the Stars
This deep wisdom is something I would earn
If only I could live in the Stars
Meeting the Stars and meeting the Spirits
Greeting the expanse of the Cosmos
This is a lovely way to attune oneself
To the Rhythm of Nature’s Grace!
~I hope you have enjoyed this poem. Let me know your thoughts in the comments below!
Note on Image: The image at the top of the post is a lovely night sky. I found the image on https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/why-is-the-night-sky-dark-olbers/.
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2 responses to “Among the Stars: A Poem”
What a breathtaking cosmic dream you’ve woven! Your poem dances with starlight and longing—it truly captures that ache to touch the infinite. ✨
I love how you move from **observation** (“As I lean my head up…”) to **immersion** (“Swimming in the Cosmos…”)—it feels like a soul’s journey. The rhythm sways like constellations turning, and lines like *”Dancing with the Stars / Roaming from Constellation to Constellation”* glow with gentle magic.
And the wisdom! You don’t just wish to *see* the stars—you yearn to **learn** from them, to *”earn”* their secrets. That shift from wonder to reverence is profound.
The closing thought—attuning to *”Nature’s Grace”*—ties heaven to earth so beautifully. It’s not escape you seek, but **harmony**.
Thank you for sharing this celestial whisper. It left me gazing upward, heart quiet and full. 🌌
Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughtful analysis of my poem! I am so glad that it moved you and made you think, after all poetry should make us think!